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R.K.’S PRIVATE SCHOOL JOURNEY

R.K.’s unfinished sketches said more than his polished drawings.

He had years of sketchbooks and a serious interest in architecture, but no awards and a real question about changing schools in Grade 11. We helped him show his process honestly and decide whether the move was worth making.

The starting point
An Indian student at an international school in Dubai applying to boarding schools for Grade 11
Academic interests
Architecture, geometry, visual art, and urban observation

An anonymized student journey, shared with initials.

Illustration of a student sitting on outdoor steps with a sketchbook
AI-generated illustration, not a photograph of R.K.

R.K.’S OFFERS

  • Choate Rosemary Hall
  • The Loomis Chaffee School
  • The Peddie School

Final choice: The Loomis Chaffee School.

Explore the decision
Other application outcomes

Rejected by The Lawrenceville School.

THE MATERIAL WAS ALREADY THERE

His sketchbooks were full, but none of it had an award attached.

R.K. filled sketchbooks with staircases, shopfronts, and the temporary structures he noticed around construction sites. He had never entered a major competition or a formal architecture program. His school offered the IB Diploma, so moving before Grade 11 meant a real decision about his courses.

HOW WE HELPED

We helped him choose work that showed his thinking, caption it factually, and test whether a move would improve his education now.

Staircases, shopfronts, and building sites.

He drew the structures he noticed around him, including temporary ones near construction.

The messy pages showed the most.

Alternative floor plans, corrected proportions, and notes about why a public space felt hard to navigate revealed how he thinks.

A working IB program at home.

His current school already worked for him, so a boarding school had to offer something clearly better.

THE BRIDGE SKETCHES

The moving bus made perfect observation impossible.

His essay followed repeated attempts to sketch a pedestrian bridge from a moving bus. The failed drawings showed him how memory quietly fills in gaps.

THE ATTEMPTS

He kept sketching from the bus.

He tried again and again to capture a pedestrian bridge from a moving bus.

THE ERRORS

Memory filled in what he hadn’t seen.

Comparing his attempts showed details his memory had supplied inaccurately.

THE REVISION

Revision taught more than a finished drawing.

The essay connected observation, error, and revision, without claiming a complete theory of cities.

LETRADO’S ROLE

We helped him explain the process clearly. He chose and captioned every image, kept unfinished work, and decided against a rushed, last-minute project.

HOW WE WORKED TOGETHER

Preparation focused on honest process and a fair test of the move.

Online examples made every young designer seem to have founded a project or won a prize. We steered him back to the work he had actually sustained.

A short visual supplement showed his process.

Each page had a factual caption: what he observed, the medium he used, and what changed between versions.

Not a professional portfolio

No drawing was presented as an architectural commission or community project. His idea for a last-minute accessibility campaign was set aside in favor of the work he had really sustained.

Courses were mapped for a Grade 11 start.

He compared how each school would recognize his prior work and help him join an established Grade 11 class.

Checked with his school

His current school confirmed the curriculum details used in the comparison.

The family tested the reason for moving.

Some conversations framed boarding school as a step toward U.S. universities. R.K. cared more about studio access, smaller discussions, and living with peers.

Worth it on its own terms

If those educational differences weren’t compelling on their own, changing countries and curricula wouldn’t be worth it.

Founders Hall at the Loomis Chaffee School, a brick building with a white cupola
Daderot · CC0. Cropped.

THE FINAL CHOICE

Loomis Chaffee offered the clearest path for joining in Grade 11.

R.K. was also admitted to Choate and Peddie. He chose Loomis Chaffee after comparing visual-arts access, course continuity, community size, and support for students joining in Grade 11.

Studio access and course continuity.Its visual arts and course planning fit the education he wanted without losing his academic path.

A concrete transition plan.Choate remained attractive academically, but the Loomis plan for joining in Grade 11 felt more concrete to R.K. and his family.

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IDEAS FOR YOUR OWN APPLICATION

Your unfinished work can show how you think.

Creative applicants don’t need to imitate professional portfolios. These questions can help you choose what to show.

Which page shows a decision changing?

Include a sketch where you corrected something, not only your most finished work.

What did you see, and what did memory add?

Look back at your observations and notice where assumptions filled the gaps.

Would you still move if university plans weren’t part of it?

Compare what you would study and how you would live now, including any courses a transfer might interrupt.

Bring the questions you are still working through.

Meet your proposed mentor in a free 45-minute introduction. We’ll talk about what would help and send a personalized plan by email afterward.

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